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Thursday, 29 October 2020

DARKNESS!

 Felicia Alovili, age 11, R13, Glen Taylor School


The air turned black all around me!

Icy fingers gripped my arm in the darkness.

I could see shadows but didn’t know where they could be from.

I felt  heavy breathing coming towards me . 

I felt a bit weird and dizzy!

I think I'm going to pass out soon ...


I woke up! It was dark. I was scared !

A shadow came near me. No! 

“GET AWAY, GET AWAY!”

The shadow pulled me, 

“Why are you dragging my hair?’

“That hurts!”, I cried.

“You are not going to hurt me!”


The shadow took me into this dark room.

The light went on and off repeatedly!

A creepy lady came in,  dripping blood!

“What are you gonna do to me? PLease don’t hurt me ... PLEASE!”



She opened the door and a rough dog came in. I hate dogs!

She started putting dog food on me and the dog started eating it off! 

Do you know how that feels ?

All his saliva dripped on me! Eww!

The dog ran out!


Next I heard a siren ! 

“Wee oo wee oo …”

“I'M IN HERE !” I shouted! 

NOOOOO! 



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